Madeline

Sept4th, 2011 My mother is one of (the) important (people)in my life. She has a(no a) good nature, when I make some mistakes, she often teach(es) me how to face it and she never condemn(s) me. She doesn't like to have a falling-out with anyone(????), she wants her family just(is) harmonious, and everyone are friendly and helpful to each other. She thinks live in peace is much better than live in tumult. She always care about her children. Everyday, (when)I will(no will) feel hungry, when(no when)(and) I finished (no ed)my all day's classes, so(no so) my mother always(has)- had already finished cooking and wait foe(waited for) us to eat dinner. Of course, I think the food is(which) cooking(cooked) from(by) my mother that(no that) is the best food in my life, it can make me get a lot of(so much) energy and make me have a healthy body. I think no one can compared with her, so I really appreciate my mother (that she) always care(s) about me and gives a great life to me.

it tells me that your mother is important to you and tell me why. it has unity. ---meredith

Sept12th, 2011

Aimee is a fashion design college student and she is crazy about the fashion things. Everyday, she will check the fashion website and blog. she started be in coming interest in fashion, when she was about 16 years old, she love to wearing the fashion clothes, she thinks it can shows real herself. But when she was a high school student, her school was not allowed wearing own clothes to go to school, she should to wearing the school uniform. She also love to read fashion magazines, she always bring the magazines to school, during the lunch time and go through the pages. She thinks fashion thing not just means the experience clothes or shoes, it can be a way to show your personality and make you more confident.

Oct7th,2011

The Devil Wears Prada Andrea Sachs is beginning to the society and she just want to be a reporter, however she is lucky enough to get the all girls dream of job -- to the famous fashion magazine RUNWAY to be a second assistant for this magazine’s editor Miranda Priestly. At the beginning, she was very aggrieved and her boss never admire her working hard. Then she got some ideas from a predecessor and she changed herself. Even she replaced the first assistant Emily to going to the Pairs Fashion Show, but this changes make her lost her boyfriend and friends. In Pairs, when Andrea saw Miranda sacrifice her good partner for many years to keep her own job, she felt so sad and disappoint, she was thinking over and over again. Finally, she decided to left Miranda and going to do some jobs that she love.